Tuesday, 22 January 2008

Story order and new Text order

Story order

1. In the churchyard, there is said to be a spirit

2. Its appearance is a fatal omen of death to those who meet it

3. The last person remaining after a funeral is watch by the spectre

4. If the person is male, it takes on the beautiful form of a woman

5. It arranges to meet him in a month from that day at the churchyard

6. The promise is sealed by a kiss

7. The spirit disappears

8. The receiver of the kiss walks out the churchyard boundary they remember the history of spectre, sink into despair and instantly die

9. They will be buried in the place of the appointment on the day they had promised to meet the spectre again

10. There was a grave of one victim, that incident was happened 4 months ago.

11. He (the victim) took a fever and died and was buried on the date that he had met up with the spectre.

12. There are several cases of the same kind

13. It appears that the spectre does not confine to the churchyard only

14. There have been instances of its appearance at the wedding and dances where it secures its victim by dancing them to fevers.

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Text order

1. You are a police man (in the story)

2. Now you have been sent to investigate the death of your colleague who had died while he was on duty, investigating mysterious deaths in a haunted village, barony of Truagh.

3. The first place, you are at the funeral of your colleague, PC Bob.

4. You interview several guests to collect clues of the deaths

5. One guest recommends you should talk to Mary at the wedding

6. You go to the wedding, finding Mary

7. When you arrive at the wedding, you witness Mary’s mysterious death

8. You interview wedding guests and find that Mary’s death related to your colleague death

9. You find more clues. Also, guests hint you about the legend of the spectre

10. You are given choices, go to graveyard or stop investigating

11. If you go the graveyard, You are met by a young beautiful stranger

12. Your are given choices, kiss her or interview her

13. If you kiss her, you die and your death becomes a legend as a death your colleague and others

14. If you interview her, you just encounter the spectre but still alive.

15. After interviewing young beautiful stranger, you found PC Bob’s notebook, revealing what has happened to him.

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